finished the latest update, and, well, GODDAMN! All of my previous laudation continues to apply. I get lost in the story, love and despise characters, and maintain a healthy bit of yearning.
When the protagonist gets with the romantic or close friend characters, I want you to take more time—slow role the camera view over the scene, across the bodies, and build up the romance. That’s all I could advise.
Don’t rush a damned thing! Keep up the great work, and we all will just be Patient.