Hello, I've enjoyed this visual novel quite a bit and noticed a decent number of errors with dialogue not glitches but rather some grammar and confusing word choices. Some of which can be easily cleaned up and fixed but a few others I feel could be slightly revamped. I've reached out via twitter to provide more details and some examples from this version. I very much like the new scenes and interactions that really make it quite the engaging experience, the most fun one was noticing how the characters respond to taking your V card and having your V card taken. I do hope more gets expanded at the table along with the shower since it seems a bit underwhelming with Sarena's level 3 compared to her previous.
I am more than willing to volunteer to help with those since I believe with a few fixes it can really be spiced up and more immersive. I look forward to the next update and any additional changes made to make the game all the more interesting. Though I would like to mention it here but, Emma doesn't seem to have much of a different reaction to taking your V card or having it taken by someone else from the testing I did. Hope that gets fixed or updated with the next one.
I hope you and the team are doing well. I'll provide any additional feedback as needed. My twitter is the same as here. I look forward to the next update and any help I may be able to provide with your game.