Great art for the characters and I liked the music, very fitting.
I'd have liked to have some dialog options, even if functionally they didn't do anything (instead of just being a linear read).
Apart from that I didn't really like the cursive font, it felt a bit hard to read; but maybe that's just me. Also for a narrative experience some spellchecking wouldn't have hurt :)
Overall great entry, and thumbs up for sticking to the theme.