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Hello,

Not sure if this is allowed, but I love this story but the "laughing" text is a bit much, so here is a copy of the script (up to chapter 13) with all the "he he he, he he, hehe" text removed, the haha's are still there but I find them less annoying to read then he he's. I also fixed a couple of broken sentences. This is not a perfect solution, but it's made the story a million time more enjoyable to read. - this is based on the "taboo" patch script.

I also went ahead and replaced all the ok, and Ok, text with Okay, or okay.

https://mega.nz/file/yE01SQwC#Oeg1qp74wX48befG_aekhvHmcZU--CgtSWCPLGx8Ppo

not a he he fan, eh? imo simply replacing ", he he." with "." is enough to improve the reading flow a lot, the few remaining ones mostly work as amplifiers of the surrounding text