This is really funny! I love your art style and narrative, it is super cute! With more time you could really build up a great story with dialogue options and a more realistic story progression rather than an immediate "you lived happily ever after, the end" and the UI is problematic as the words go off canvas on the main menu. But obviously given the short time frame you didn't have much time for a mind-blowing visual novel . However, it is really impressive that you managed to give these characters such clear and strong personalities with so few lines. You should definitely keep working on this game and build on it!
P.S. I like that your choice of date impacts the dialogue, it gives meaning and purpose to choosing a character. It also makes me want to replay the game 3 more times to see the different dialogue snip for each character.