I played it a bit and was interesting. Hope you do continue with the project.
The arts were really good. It was you who made it? You said you started drawing recently,but the art looks like something of an experienced drawer 🤔 anyway,I liked the art. Good backgrounds. That map was interesting too,tough you probably needs to change it later,as it is like they live in a farm looking at the map hahaha.
Loved the art for...o forgot their names lol...Mr Stone? And...I think it was Gil... they're all cute,but I liked more the art of those two haha.
There are some errors in English and scene transitions,but you probably are correcting it.
I want to see how the story will develop ^-^I only think that start progress too fast...like in 1 day they're as intimate as if they knew one another for months...it is weird
Good work anyway,and congratulations for all that was already achieved. I'll be waiting for more :D