This is great! :D Xou're very good at not just structuring the pace of the story, but I like how xou introduced the characters :)
The sprites are soops cute, the overall vibe is great, and I love how xou've incorporated "Memories" to add additional information :p
And I am eteeernally greatful for the animal genitalia~! UwU while I have no problem with furries having human-shaped jiggly-bits, I personally prefer anthros to have appropriate anatomy :3
Will xou be continuing this trend with the other characters? Pleeease tell me we will see a bear-esque boner T_T?
Xou've done an amazing job with xour VN, it's refreshingly unique and I love the premise :) keep up the good work! >.</