This was quite a fun visual novel! I enjoyed the art and character design, as well as the dialogue because it felt like I had been transported into time. The plot was interesting and though predictable it was quite an enjoyable read! Though I did have a hard time reading through Eloise's dialogue and trying to tell the difference between her narrating her actions or her actually speaking, and also it was quite the tough time for me to get the 3rd ending (wherein I think we die) but I quite enjoyed the Slayer Ending.
I was also endeared towards Glywndel (I'm sorry if I'm spelling her name wrong). I thought she'd be an uptight and strict person but turns out she's quite soft and warm, she's only like this due to Lord Fox which I can't blame her. I'm quite curious why lord Fox even lets her live but I think it's attributed to the fact that he needs someone to keep the manor clean and organize things but he'd rather not have too many people or else it'd be hard to sneak around. And he does have leverage against the poor woman, I'm quite curious to see Lord Fox and Glywndel's story before Eloise came, I feel like there'd be an even bigger plot and though Eloise can have her happy ending, Glywndel won't get that luxury until we reach Eloise's story.
Aside from that, really enjoyed this visual novel! Loved reading through the dialogue and picking apart the historical context (such as Eloise's apparent shock to Lord Fox not attending mass) and the words that are being written (very much love the way it was worded). Great job with this one!!