Horny poetry!!! We love to see it.
Only suggestion I’d have is to have a play around with CSS (or whatever you’d need for this version of twine) after the voting period ends. I feel like the UI and the actual content of the game clash a little bit. I’d expect poetry for your undead lover to be presented in darker tones, maybe even using the ones for the cover art!
Otherwise this was a really nice read and very impressive under the time limit! Well done!