Solid work on the dialog system being added. I felt a lot of personality come through the dialog and it was the most interesting part for me. The platforming while functional, felt a little lackluster compared to the charisma of the characters. Also having unlimited flight made it trivial and I was able to complete the level in a few seconds. I was originally confused by the blood orange section, as my first play-through, I just ran through it and automatically made it to the final section. I’d suggest a check to ensure all oranges are destroyed before you can proceed to the next level.
I wish there was more dialog at the party! I’m sure that was due to time constraints though. I think the strength of your game was in the writing and I wish you focused more on that than necessarily the platforming aspects.
Also, a final note, I’d be careful using copyrighted assets, even in free games. Better off using free assets you find out there.
Overall, great job!