All I have to say Is WTF did I just play the end is shocking and I did not expect that.
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You did really well for your first game but what I do have to say is that the ending wasn't satisfying at all It felt like it was made for shocks than anything else which makes the game point less to play plus its not even required to talk to the girls just go to the maze and get a item and to add to it you dont get punished for getting things wrong. I know its your game and you can do what you want with it but I think if you patch and add things like punishment, a reason to talk with the girls, more variety in the endings " like not every ending should have her eat the food have one where the main character dies or a good ending where you pick none, because you made a game about a choice but if things end in the same way there is no choice really". So maybe before you go on to make your next big game you should patch things up like the item menu.
I'm sorry for picking at your game even though you made a good first game take these tips in because you want your game to be original but in the state its in now it reminds me of another rpg maker horror game that did much better.
I hope you read this with your thoughts open and decide to patch this up ill probably play it again if you do.
hope you have a good day.
-rebor the rpg horror master
That's all right, your feedback and advice is much appreciated! Agreed, I was originally planning on having other endings but due to the time limit, I wasn't able to. If I decide to refurbish this game though, I know there's a lot to change and I'll be sure to take your feedback into consideration. I should try and make one with proper planning and no time limit to see how I go haha
Thanks again though!