hi i have feedback for you !!! I have come across loads of error's and grammatical error's and bits that might not have translated over to UK ENGLISH correctly, being a English born and breed its noticeable and if it help i would gladly offer my help to fix the issues as what i have read so far i like a lot and i could see it beings a high rated V.N. with a few tweak's here and there and could go from a good read it a read you cant put down until the end, and it already has got under my skin that the landlady split up and that her X-husband want to remarry in a month, was OOO i see a cat fight about to happen, and that is the signs of very writing if it affects people on a personal level, I hope to hear from you soon, thanks for your time Mr GaTeZ.