I am very sorry if I have offended anyone with my comment, it wasn't my intention. I liked the story a lot, it was just a thing that bothered me, and I wasn't sure if it was something that others would have trouble with, so I wanted to mention it. I originally hesitated to post about it, and I realize I shouldn't have. Sorry.
Thank you for understanding, I'm sorry about being so tilted in my first response too. I've gotten the same comment before and it's just really upsetting to have someone criticize a personal preference in your own passion project. We're making these projects to please ourselves and express and explore what we want to, so thank you again for seeing that side.