Lovely game you've made, having lots of fun with it.
I do have a couple of questions though.
1. Are there going to be any extracirricular scenes outside of working, because so far...there's not much to do other than work and sleep and eat.
Specifically, I wondered if there were going to be odds things to do around the town such as:
Going to the gym and working as a part-time assistnt there for some of the locals.
Jogging at the park and picking up guys at the local bathroom.
Studying at a local community center at the college and maybe getting a chance to tutor someone.
Walking around the city and maybe finding different people who you can pickpocket.
Doing some martial arts after paying to enroll in a martial arts school in town.
Perhaps taking the bus and going down to the local beach to hang out with the local sailors.
Visit a graveyard to meet up with the local goths during their poetry slam.
Heading down to the animal sanctuary and taking care of the animals there.
Spending time at the zoo and saving someone from an animal that got loose and getting hired on.
Taking a strange paid trial at the hospital....at night.
Helping one of the local bikers get parts from the town junkyard.
Just little things like that.