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I'm not a regular visual novel player but that one really interested me. It has a cool story with cool characters. Everything flows nice. It's a fun novel to read/play. 

There are only two things I need to note:

1, the "bad ending" has a good flow but everything happens so fast compared to the good ending. I know it is supossed to be an ending where you become evil but I think we could  have something there as a reminder that they are people. What happened to the relation of  them after this end? And her sister? Nothing's explained on that evil ending.

2, I've noticed a bug when I was returning to some points with the loading method. Like the character images glitching (the character image did not fit with the situation) and then the game suddenly crashing. Note that I played on the web version so I don't know if  it happens on the .exe version.

Anyway, I really liked it! Great job!

Thank you for the feedback!  

In terms of the "evil" route, it's more intended to be a morbid curiosity, as opposed to an equivalent to the "true" route, I also felt that continued exploration of the "aftermath" of the evil route would've been too much of a tone change to the story.  

However, I can understand your viewpoint, and will definitely consider your feedback in future projects!  Thank you for your openness! :)

Also, yes... thank you for bringing this to attention.  I have received comments from friends and other players about the loading bug prevalent in WebGL.  There is apparently an extension / engine incompatibility that will take some time for me to fix.

I will do my best to release a stable version of the loading / saving function for the web... but it is recommended that if the error happens to you... that you use the chapter selection in the main menu to get back to the most recent part.

I apologize for the inconvenience... I am still pretty new to the development side of Visual Novels, but will do my best to get it fixed eventually.