Well the improvements are okay but its kindof dark, I hope the next version will make it a bit lighter including my suggestions i told you , by the way remember my suggestion of a prologue scene where before the knight is about to rescue the princess a stranger probably a witch gives the hero a potion which would help him resolve the conflicts and after he drank it, he feels strange but different, the stranger laugh and claimed that he will find out soon.
And then in the first part of the game when you first activate the sex change this is when the protagonist realize he gains the ability to switch genders,what do you think of it ?