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The game is much improved! I hope you were able to retain the vibe you were going for but the gameplay experience read better from the player side. I didn’t see the grammar issue and I think I understand the logic of the game. Good improvements!

Thank you for the feedback! I think I was able to retain my idea even even have the things, I didnt manage to do before, added to the game. :D