I'm not really sure where to start since there's so much to comment on, haha. I suppose firstly, I should say that I'm absolutely in love with the logo! It's so pretty <3 The character designs are cool, especially for our protagonist, and don't even get me started on how gorgeous that little nameable animated seahorse is ^-^
I loved the huge number of choices, and since I've only done one playthrough so far, I haven't even scratched the surface with exploring all the choices and endings! (I got the Non-Mutual Understanding ending xD)
I do love me a feisty protagonist, so it was a lot of fun to be able to choose options to fight back and defend myself :3
The CG I unlocked is absolutely gorgeous, so I'll definitely have to try and get more of those!
And yay for voice acting :D I'm a big fan of VA in VNs. And it was extra fun to hear Lauren in another project since she was in one of ours + I've played a different game from the jam that she was also voicing in. She's got such a cool and versatile voice ^-^
I did notice that a couple of her narration lines when she's first dragged onto the boat were playing with the wrong text lines. I think they were playing one line early. Sorry, I should have made a proper note of which lines they were because I'm not very helpful >.<
I also can't comment on the minigame yet because I haven't come across it in my first go.
Edit: So I went back to try and find the lines in question! It's on the line: "To call me such a thing as that, like I'm some object... Disgusting." That's the line which is printed, but the voice line says "But, I must keep quiet. I need for them to let their guard down so I can sing them into a pacified state."
And then when the "But I must keep quiet." line is printed, it plays the voice line: "Then, once they awaken from their daze... this encounter will have been nothing more than a dream."
And when the "Then, once they awaken from their daze..." line is printed, the voice line "I struggle and flail against them as they lift me, and my tail slaps one of them in the face." plays.
And then that last voiced line about struggling and flailing is never printed, it moves on to a text + voiced line that is Clive saying "Clear the tank, boys!"
That's it. Just those few lines out of sync and then everything in my playthrough was back to normal :3