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You know what dev, i appologize not for writing crap not for saying bad, bit appologize to you for all of this as in sense, it doesn't matter to you, i am the way i m, i don't take shit has soft heart but built around rough Just play avn not for sex not story but to see some virtual unrealistic romance, love that doesn't exist in irl, that i never got or expect in future, but happy for others, i spread hate here just for one reason because i love it, i loved this avn story first part felt like a complete wholesome, a guy steal cars, live and have fun with his buddy, fell in love with a girl, even with their differences they come together and mc supported her when they were having their child, left everything behind fir her, after their daughter their life was complete and fulfilling, then shit hit for some gang conflict and money laundering, innocent lily died, i cried fir real many did, then you made another good thing that you made mc take revenge on those bastard not enough but something i never got in any other avn, did everything he could, and as last resort to save his remaining family his wife Olivia and daughter he left town for good, just to keep them save i felt like a complete story of a true hero a really great avn, i didn't wanted anything else except for just two more renders in that part 1,mc coming back hugging Olivia, and his daughter and then story end, it could be greatest best avn, short but best,

I said bad thing for part 2,i m sure you agree it wasn't good,but i compared it to part 1 felt distorted,felt betrayed,felt why i had to play this,i could have just forgotten it,and remained in my memory that it ended in part with mc returning to his family,i know a fantasy bit it turned too bad,i  hated you for this,for making me felt depressed alomst,i blubber shit on you,i regret it,since you might have felt bad for it,but i realise it wasn't on you,it was your story,you could write the way you wants it,


It was me who fell in love with a virtual character,it's story its plot,it was me who should be blamed for just living in Fantasy since real life isnt like that but far way my broken heart wasn't your concern but i shifted on you for my mistake


I sincerely apologise ti you,i will never say anything to anyone,i love seeing perspective and don't judge but i did to you,it's your story buddy write the way you want not the way people like,cheer up i m not going to comment any shit anymore,anywhere,i m sorry again.

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Now you got it bro,I know the feeling really!I felt that too because I fell in love with Lily's personality but as shit hit the fan worse things happened,but that's what it is right?what is life without pain?,what is life without drama?, isn't it how it's always been? that's how real life is!,not because it's just a VN is they can't show some emotions anymore,life isn't perfect why would a game be,what was the difference?,Plus the story having a sour start just make the ending sweeter!I know it man,trust me I've been playing VN's for 3 years I played more games that are worse,this  one is nah it's just pretty minor for me.Just let the story go on bro don't let your emotions take over, that's what real men do.

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yup you are right there are worse story that is written poorly it isn't even written badly just felt upset where gane took a complete 180 turn mc,a loving man who fought gangs alone for bringing justice to the murderer of her love,really handsome though, leaving family for their better life,to a douchebag looking old man,who is just whinning about his life,corrupting a Lil massesuer girl,perving over a bartender,who is his best friend neice,and lusting over a loli girl,and doesn't giving a damn how his wife lived these past years not caring for her,just bitching about his own problems.yeah it has its flaws but biggest one was story started as something and character with time become bad,and mc worst possible,not bad avn not dev fault but definitely not my type of story.

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It's okay, I understand you guys, but I don't want to let this story stay only in the heroes and violence.

I want this story to bring out how the family faces different things, whether it's happiness or pain, and in the end they can resolve their misunderstanding and hatred and live together forever.

And at the end of the story, the past people MC, Olivia, Lucas all learn to really grow up.

This is a story of watching the characters grow and change.

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Yeah i understand,everyone grows it's part of life,but hope that grow for something better in future especially mc since till now he has become worse than a gangster,to a rapist,to a pedophile,to a complete sick pycho who makes me puke to play as, hope he grows even 1% better

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Have you tried to play Chapter 2? I explained a lot about the inner workings of the MC there.

What I want to say in chapter 1 is that the MC has just returned to the city, and there are many people with familiar and unfamiliar mentalities.

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nope not yet,and not going to,i already have trauma,which was my fault to indulge myself into avn,  may it become better or best avn in future i ain't playing it ever again.whatever you end up with story in future of this avn for me it ended mc returning to his family and they lived happily as in part 1 itself,for me it's end their and i m happy with it.

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That's the thing on you bro,you just focused on the bad parts,you don't know how to move,how could you possibly enjoy it if it's still not in the interesting part but you're already giving it up,give it a chance c'mon,if you don't like this kind of story which is really good,try F.I.L.F then,maybe you'll find your "Perfect" Incest shit there.I mean everything been perfect so far.

I said to you, i m over it, i ain't criticizing it or saying anything like it would change, if a story can't be better than it's better to leave it unfinished or change way,i m over with this avn and ended with my personal ending and fav one,it ends their fir me,you all are free to continue with this avn wherever it ends whether you like it or not for me it doesn't matter anymore it was a good avn which was short and ended in part 1.

 u r working on a new update right?? When will new update roll out?