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Hiya~

So, I only just started B1 some days ago(I'm late to the party, I know. Please don't sue me!), pree good so far, overall. I don't know how far you go back to check dialogue or anything else within your game, but since starting, I've noticed quite a few discrepancies with grammar(repeating words, misplaced words, wrong tense, etc.) and whatnot. There was also a point in time where the name for the person talking didn't match up with who was actually talking(Sayumi was labelled as Yukine talking at one point, for example).

I have no clue about B2 as of yet. Might see me come back again after I've had time to check it out. I expect to be hooked in further from the story continuing from it, though. You've got yourself a new sprouting fan~

But, uh... yeah. That's basically all~

Feel free to drop by Discord so you can point them out properly if you'd like or even here, and about the name not matching; happens once in book 1 and we are made aware of that, but we're not into fixing it yet, focusing on book 2 first. Thank you.