Oh man, I love surreal stuff, so this was right up my alley, especially with the dreamscape sequences which were beautifully done :3 I really like what you've done with the quotes on the title screen too! That's such a cool idea. There's so much to unpack in this even if it is a demo. I don't want to say any spoilers, but the sense of foreboding was so great that when I reached the part that said it was the end of the demo and to check back on itch in a few days, I was like, whaaaaat? Nooo T_T You can't end it here x3 So I guess I will have to be patient and check back! Haha.
(Apologies for the double post here and on your jam page! I just don't know if the jam comments end up getting lost or something, so I always feel like it's better to post in both places.)
Good luck with the rest of development :3 It's a really intriguing story you've got going on!