I have a great time with this VN!
The atmosphere is fun and the music is suitable for the scenarios.
The Unease mechanic can be done better but for a story telling tool it works.
SPOILER
I love the concept of Nagi a lot as a character that was created purely to love you (N-not that I know anything about it). Kind of feels bad for Nagi tho since she didn't technically deserve to be treated that way. Let's hope Ayumu gives her a new purpose in his future story or probably in other works (*wink wink*).
Also that ending...
Hah, you lil rascal you got me good with that true ending!
Waking up from my own fictional mind by exiting the world itself, is a genius move I would say so myself.
Also, I think it's great that you named the file that you need to delete in order to replay the game as "Persistent". Only a persistent player will take their time to delete files in two different places just to see other endings. Or maybe they forgot the password idk.
Can't wait for your next horror VN!
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Thank you very much, I'm glad you liked it! <3
I can't take any credit for the naming of the peristent data, though: that's the default name Ren'py calls data if it 'persists' between multiple playthroughs of the same VN haha ;; I suppose it's quite a fortunate coincidence, though, that the name adds to the thematics of the story!