Scarlett "Well if you see me desperately revising in the library, maybe you could give me some tips?"
At least give MC a chance to meet her in the lib, that's impossible per Scarlett's location update in scripts/functions.rpy :)
MC and BFF are confused about the time when kissing on weekend morning (love makes, uh, timeless?).
The possible ends of `label BFF_kiss_pants_repeat_night` should check for the time, something like
if time_day >= 4:
BFF "Good night, [name]."
show bg bff kiss pants night 31
PC "Good night, [friend]."
else:
BFF "Have a wonderful weekend, [name]."
show bg bff kiss pants night 31
PC "Thanks. You too, [friend]."
(plus the others, with the images 35 and 39. and all scene ends I missed :))
"Better for seeing you" if "1: pic tits" not in em.choices or "1: pic bum" not in em.choices or "1: pic both" not in em.choices:
I think your condition in scenes/emily.rpy::498 does not what you wanted to accomplish: This one is shown until all three pics are taken, I'd guess it was meant as the fallback option before any photo shoot.
Should I be right this one can be rewritten as
"Better for seeing you" if not ("1: pic tits" in em.choices or "1: pic bum" in em.choices or "1: pic both" in em.choices):
or
"Better for seeing you" if "1: pic tits" not in em.choices and "1: pic bum" not in em.choices ad "1: pic both" not in em.choices: