Huh, after all this time you're actually the first person to notice these!
Thanks, I'll fix both of those for the next update :)
"Better for seeing you" if "1: pic tits" not in em.choices or "1: pic bum" not in em.choices or "1: pic both" not in em.choices:
I think your condition in scenes/emily.rpy::498 does not what you wanted to accomplish: This one is shown until all three pics are taken, I'd guess it was meant as the fallback option before any photo shoot.
Should I be right this one can be rewritten as
"Better for seeing you" if not ("1: pic tits" in em.choices or "1: pic bum" in em.choices or "1: pic both" in em.choices):
or
"Better for seeing you" if "1: pic tits" not in em.choices and "1: pic bum" not in em.choices ad "1: pic both" not in em.choices: