Hi,
Just played the updated demo. I really liked the additional choices, I think they added a lot to the game. I do think there's an error, I think that the volume that controls the voices is marked as "sound volume" in the preferences screen (and vice versa). I also think that the intro is a bit too abbreviated (I know you did that in response to another commenter who said it was too long) but I don't think the MC ever asks her dad about the trunks in the new version, so I think that some conversation between just the two of them (maybe not the whole thing from before, but something) would be helpful. I think that cutting that out we miss out on most of the relationship between the MC and her family-we don't really get to see it play out at breakfast, it's all her little brothers interrupting, so I thought that the interaction between just the MC and her dad had a purpose (sorry for not saying so sooner).