That was so much fun! The base concept of delivery w/the screenwriting script was so genius I had to keep reading and then I so easily fell in love with your character writing!! (Al is the best??? and Valen is a sleeper hit) The way you integrated louie zong's track and the character portraits emoting really elevated the story without taking over as the highlight. Simple, strong, colorful, very glad I took the time to check it out. (Just thought I should put my review here)