As I understand it, day 14 (before the battle with Zephyr) is the last thing in this novel.
Positive: an interesting story, there are memorable characters. The visual is different for everyone, but I liked it.
Negative: The implementation, the presentation of the story is bad. The dialogues seemed to be written with a difference of several weeks. The choices you make are not felt. Their consequences are not felt. If you choose a character and build a relationship with him, then literally after a couple of scenes there is a feeling that you are seeing each other for the first time. The transition between scenes is also so-so. Battle scenes are not needed in this game. If you cut them out, nothing will change.
If the author ever completes this novel (or rather reworks it), pays attention to reviews and criticism, then honor and glory to him.
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There is also the pub which fits very badly into the game because you can access it at any time during the game. Otherwise everything you said is true but that would require a complete overhaul of the game to correct all the problems, and I don't think the developer has the motivation to redo everything.