The first thing that stood out to me was the use of italics on the first page. For a while, I had assumed that these adjectives served some sort of importance and I tried to remember them for later, only for them to not be extremely relevant/worth remembering. Though, it possibly could have been but I didn't play in a way where they mattered. One feature I think is unnecessary is the save system. Aware of its presence, I didn't bother using it as I could've simply just gone back to the previous page. One or the other would be ideal. I appreciate the use of personalities to distinguish all the characters, it makes them stand out.
-liam