The concept for the story is really interesting here, you also tell there is some lore here, giving the world more life and history to it to really immerse the player in. The illustrations themselves are great too. Perhaps the font color for choices can be changed? It often will blend into the background, making the legibility unclear at times. I particularly loved being told which choices are important or not, allowing the player to really think about their actions instead of blindly clicking whichever. Though I only got two different endings (one of them I got twice), I can tell there is a lot of content to sit through here.
-liam