Immediately I enjoy the presentation. It’s simple but I appreciate that it isn’t a black screen with white text. This was enjoyable! The writing was funny and relatable and made me want to keep clicking through the options. I think the illusion of choice could be pushed much further, I would love to see more per page even if it leads to nothing.
“With the alarm giving no chance…”
I think there could have been an opportunity to make a choice, even if it leads to the same result in the end. If you care about the illusion of choice and how it the choice doesn’t matter, then I would really lean into that by presenting choices at every possible moment.
Pasta and waiting. Its funny and super relatable. Perhaps the ellipses (...) could go longer and the player has to find the right set to click instead of the choice being highlighted. Like imagine seeing this:
…………………………………………………………………………………. And to continue the player has to find the right one to continue. It would play along with the waiting time too because it takes time to find the right ellipses.
-Kyle W.