The Artwork looks amazing, the plot is, quite frankly a breath of fresh air, and Agnarr is perfect husbando material right there. However there are quite a lot of misspellings and some sentences that need to be revised to make better sense, a native level English beta-reader would certainly help. Do you have planned to make a Discord for the VN? If so, I'd love to join it.
Kudos, and keep up the good work! :)