Always loved your work! I care more about personality than body type, but its hard not to be weak in knee to something so fine! I'll get back to you with my further thoughts after trying it! :/3
Writing seems fine other than some grammar issues here or there. There is comfortable flow of logic, no real leaps or information left out, pace is quick at first for intro, but that is the norm for this trope of getting right to it.
Art/Sprites/Background is spectacular, no surprise there! The animated bits are subtle but enough for a real treat!
Plenty attention to detail to go around! And the title screen! After going through what is there DAMN! The writing is good but you have always been such an amazing artist! (least since I first found your FA)