This VN has no business being nearly this charming or adorable, heheheh~ I love the writing style (complete with emotes!), the sound effects, and the use of SL screenshots for all of the visuals. They all work well together, and give the whole experience a unique feel and flavor.
The writing especially is rather evocative despite its simplicity; the personalities of both Chloe and Mari shine through quite clearly. I very much enjoyed watching their characters and relationship alike develop through their interactions, heheh.
All in all, I had a great time with this VN, and I'd be delighted to see more such work from you in the future~