The art was stunning and the music was beautiful! I usually don't really read visual novels, but this was a nice experience. The writing was good and it was nice that there was clear progression through the story. Very well done!
One tiny thing that confused me a bit was writing the down the scrumbled letters. At first I thought I had to create a word out of the scrambled letters, but it seemed any answer worked? I did not completely understand how it fit in the story :)
But besides that tiny thing it was a really nice experience! Great job :D