I think the first sentence in the description should have a period in the middle!
Er, after Domini?
Maybe it's just me but I read it as "It is the year 1472 Dracos Domini, and the land of Ballark is bathed in unrest."
So maybe a comma? Could just be me.
Oh, I went back and forth over putting a comma there half a dozen times during editing.
There was one originally, but I removed it so the line would read all in one breath.
I slightly prefer it as is, but it's also totally fair to prefer a comma there.