Your fluid writing kept pulling me forward in the story which was very satisfying! What felt unsatisfying was dying suddenly (which I did a two times on play throughs) after getting into the the story. For example, I had the diver suit (which I figure could be used in the water) but decided to explore the forest. Big mistake. Rather than die immediately (with no undo) maybe you can reward my exploration with some new text and warn me danger is ahead and if keep going further into the forest then kill me. :) I’m pointing out a good problem to have since I wanted to keep reading.