Hey Hex! I thought Turritopsis was a good game that told a really nice story. I felt for Oliver and was relieved I got the good ending my first try. ^^ Your art is so pretty and fit the overall solemn yet hopeful theme of the game really well.
Have you thought about making more of this after the jam ends? I feel like there's plenty of room for expansion! Personally I'd like to see more background info on Oliver, such as how he discovered he was trans, what was his mom's initial reaction to it, and more about Oliver's school life. Also, I would have LOVED to see Oliver going out to the mall and having a good time -- he deserved it after all the bullying/unhappy situations we read through!