Heya!
It's soo good!!! I think I'm just around 1 hour of reading but I already love the story, the characters, the worldbuilding. The art and renders of the background as well as the girls are also excellent. I also like the small animation of some parts even the changing background colors when it transitions to the next scene.
Is this your first visual novel? It's really well made, it contends or is even better with what they sell on steam and other paid VNs here.
I wonder how long is this current version and how much of it is the "in development" phase as of now? Anyway, time for more reading! :))