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 You seem to have a good start here, and a good basic command over the engine, but you have a few places where your text gets cut off by the end of the text box. Right now, your maps feel pretty large and empty -- consider shrinking them down in size so the necessary elements that you have in them will fill the space more and the player will have an even better sense of direction for their progression. 

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