One critique I have is that 97 minutes isn't a very long time. If it were 97 hours, that would be more believable in my opinion. I think ~4 days of space travel sounds more realistic than ~1.5 hours.
Other than that, I really liked what's there so far. Looking forward to more of the story.
realistically the fastest speed possible is the speed of light and at that speed it would take almost 2 years just to leave our own solar system let alone get to another one of the 3K+ solar systems in our galaxy and if pantheria is in a different galaxy it would take 100K years just to reach the edge of our own galaxy.... lets keep things unrealistic for now