Whoever gave you negative feedback must have been having a shitty day & decided to try & share their pain. You've introduced an interesting setup here that I have no doubt will lead to an exciting set of paths for chapter 3. Speaking for myself I can't wait for the next instalment.
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Thank you, HazyTank. I agree, I do think there's a lot of potential with how I set everything up. I'm excited to explore Rose's hesitation towards being romantic with her wards, and it'll be interesting to see how Petal and Bliss react to this new information. Rose and Suzi should also develop a fun and interesting friendship which I'm going to expand on. Some of these revelations seem bad, but ultimately will have wonderful outcomes for the story. I appreciate the praise, HazyTank. Sincerely.