First and foremost, I love the visual styling of this VN. The font, the interface, the portraits, the CGs and effects applied thereto—all of it is airtight, heheheh. The effect near the beginning during the roll call scene especially is a nice touch, as is the red static effect.
Second, the use of auto-advancing text for interruptions and racing thoughts in particular is quite well executed, I feel. I'm partial to using that effect in the same way in my own works, so it made me smile to see it here and to see it done so adroitly, heheh.
And last but certainly not least, the character writing really shines in this VN. Jamie and Claire alike are vivid, believable, and strongly developed, and the minor & off-screen characters are solid, too! Indeed, the codependency is almost TOO realistic, heh.
All of that is to say, excellent work, Becky~ I'm very eager to see what you make in the future!