Just finished the first chapter and holy shit is this good. I think i see some of the inspirations but i'll hold my tongue for now until i have more to say than just "it feels like this!" can't wait to read chapter 2 and wait for 3 with baited breath!
you have something really insightful and emotional and horradorable here
themes of how the military promises power that perverts you (not in the good way!) ,how that perversion is still there even if they arent strict or let u have an idealized and cute form ,how the military apparatus uses our passion and our desire to escape destitution to make recruitment that much more seductive... are all really intense and hit with a clarity that something in this style could only provide
thank you for making this. glad it doesnt just live inside your head anymore
-Drizzlebyte