Stopping the time is not a bad idea, but the game just isn't very unique. Add a more unique mechanic or make the time stopping the core mechanic of your game rather than a way to "cheat". The music is good though.
I hope the feedback helped you a bit, and it would be nice if you could check out our submission too, it has 0 ratings xD, thank you! :)
PS: Which cookies did you eat?