I can't believe this was all created in a week! And you've squeezed SO MUCH good depth into this small game. Yes please to an expansion. The sprite and background for this game are just beyond beautiful, and I love how clearly you convey the 'stranger's' otherness in her dialogue. Everything in the design is so well put together - the use of colour, of tracking through the background, the font for the dialogue. Lovely attention to detail. That last ending is a really satisfying find when you get it too. All I can say is that I want more! Also kudos to the creators of the soundtrack and sound effects too - they're excellent!
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Thank you so much for this kind and detailed feedback, I really appreciate knowing what aspects worked for you! And yes, a week is short but I was lucky that I had the time to focus on it, and I had fun trying to squeeze everything in that I could.
I will be posting some concept art and details on twitter in due course, and as for the stuff that didn’t make it – there certainly may be more to see…
(Thank you also for the feedback for my teammates, I thought they did great too, and I will pass it along!)