As an experiment I replaced in script.rpy
, he he.
with
.
(over 400 hits as of v11! and some 100 more with variants like ", ha ha.")
I think the text gets better with the change, it is used every handful of lines and makes it, for me, less fun to read the story.
Sorry if this comment is grumpy, but I honestly believe the removal improves the quality. I very much enjoy your game and like what you are doing, the above is meant as friendly feedback.