You can ABSOLUTELY tell how much work you put into it. Here it is almost 3 days later and I'm still thinking about it.
One of the scenes that keeps rolling around in my mind is the super liminal white poolroom. Was Anemoiapolis your inspiration for those scenes?
I know it's semi obscure, but your room had that same feeling of both not being 'right' and depressingly empty, but also something was watching you.