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Thanks for the feedback!

Well, I added some real life experience to the prologue, maybe that's why :)

The bug will be fixed in the patch that I will upload soon.

Yup, the grammar will only improve after I managed to hire a proof reader or an editor, and thank you!

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well, English is my first language so hey, you need some editing/proofreading?

That said, the writing really only needs some minor work compared to other itch VNs so awesome job so far!

And yeah, adding a bit of 'reality' usually tends to help.

Glad you were willing to share a glimpse of that nostalgic awkwardness.

Thanks for the offer! But I'm not in a position to hire anyone financially. But I'll keep you in mind and will contact you when I'm able to hire someone. But I really appreciate it :)

No problem!