Now that it's updated, I finally got around to giving this a try.
I was surprised by how awkwardly believable the prologue was. Ah, the bittersweetness of a failed first love.... Kinda hit home, ngl.
The 'Moon is beautiful' bit was especially nice. I really didn't expect that.
Oh, Mom(Mira) stil isn't caalling me anything than MC instead of my typed in name though.
That and minor grammar hiccups here and there, so far so good! Keep it up!