First off, the writing is great, heavily enjoyed my time with it in that respect and the character portraits and their in song sprites are cute. I was going to talk about the rhthym game aspect and how it throws you too much into the deep end at the start, but frankly that's a really minor nitpick and not as important as the heavy static that would occasionally play midway through my play time. Occasionally, one of the tracks that would be part of the loop would just be straight static, I doubt it's intentional and it heavily detracted from my experience. Im not sure what caused it but I hope that it's fixed for others who will play the game later.
EDIT: I should note, I do like the game, it just sucks there are portions of it where the music is replaced with loud static. Friend was also experiencing this problem